AlexsChocolateBanana

..Yeah I kinda dieddd, after awhile.. After school started I got really caught up in my homework, which usually takes the majority of  my night when I get home, and then I like to relax.. or hangout with the family. I've been on the computer way too much so I guess that kind of helped. I've become more socialable (idk is that a word?) in class, (I'm prettii shy irl) so I got moar frends, and we hang'd out alot (is that a word too? LOL) But I still came on a litto bit. I kinda stopped dolling for awhile and took a break from that, but now that I feel I can get my homework done faster, yet still get a good grade, I'm gonna attempt to gradually

Soyeh...TT Mah rabbit, Mary, has died. She died while I was away, at a friends house, but I'm pretty sure she died right before I left to go their. TT I was kinda sad that I was there, but a little happy that I wasn't there to see her lying there, motionless ~_~. A few days before, I found out that blowflies, had gotten to her, and idk how to say it, but.. they had babies/maggots w/e, so I was shocked about that, and cried even then, because I was worried about her. She was old. Now, just for the sake of remembering her, I wanna tell you how I got her, because, I'm that bored/sad and don't feel like moving my body besides my hands/finger

kso I'm "trying" to write a story, I've been trying to a long time, but now I've actually taken the time, to write one seriously. Some of my friends at school have read what few paragraphs I have written, and they think its good, but now, I need some advice from you guys, considering I know my friends won't say "Omg, thats terrible." b/c that's just to cruel. So, please, say what you want to say about it, but not like 'omg lol that sucks like crap, you shouldn't be a writer, lol that was crap...' I know it might be, but keep your comments to a limit o.o' K so here it goes Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Beginning (??Wow I couldn't think of